These are the first five panels of the story.  Right now my plan is to have four panels on each page.  I have decided to do most of the panels with graphite and white colored pencil on brown paper.  This working method is relatively fast and produces an aesthetic I am relatively pleased with.  I have not decided whether I want to keep them this way.  In an ideal world I would probably print them all out on watercolor paper and add color to them.  However, I have experimented with this technique a little and there are a number of complications, most notably time investment.  Right now I am looking for critique and ideas about the drawing, the format, the possibility of color, etc.